Monday, February 18, 2013

Page 31-35 2nd Paper Draft


                Some of the few ways that Mr. Escalate and my former high school teacher Ms. Laughlin are different, is they both taught in a very different environments Mr. Escalate taught in a very poor area with lots of theft and gangs. While Ms. Laughlin taught in a more red neck type area, with less gangs and theft and more dirt biking and four wheeling.  They also taught two very opposite subjects Mr. Escalate taught Math. While Ms. Laughlin taught English. Although they had their differences they both had very many aspects in common. The biggest role Mr. Escalante and Ms. Laughlin played in their students’ lives were giving them inspiration and with that self-confidence.  

            Both Mr. Escalate and Ms. Laughlin and are very strict with their students, they expect respect and if the students don’t show them that respect, then they treat that student the same way that student treats them. If the student is respectful to the teacher then the teacher will give that student respect back and also more privileges. For example, one time during class one of Mr. Escalates students flipped him off during class instead of taking this as an insult Mr. Escalate took it as a challenge. “Oh so you’re the figure man well I am that figure man two.” After this statement, Mr. Escalate then proceeded to show this student how to do multiplication on his fingers. When Ms. Laughlin is being disrespected, if the student is talking back, she will use intelligent words that the student doesn’t understand to make sure that student is not disrespectful again. The other students in the class will laugh because the student getting put in their place, so to speak is stubbing over their words not sure how to reply. Even though the majority of the class doesn’t understand exactly what she is saying either.

            Another way I have seen these teachers gain respect is have a strict late policy, Ms. Laughlin in forces the rules as well as Mr. Escalate. If a student was late to her class she would ask them to wait outside of the classroom until she had a chance to talk to them. One time when one of Mr. Escalates students were late he asked him to leave his classroom as well although, he didn’t want them to come back into his class at all that day, if that student was late. Often time though, in Mr. Escalante’s class students wanted to be there, they truly felt satisfaction in learning and being is his classroom. By being strict with their students, they gained respect through respect they were able to push their students to become successful.

            Another way Escalate and Laughlin are similar is they both have high standards for their students, they know what they can become. The great things that they can do with their life, this is why they will push their students to their full potential. They also know what that full potential is for each individual that comes into their classroom. Ms. Laughlin proved this with a student in my English class, his name was Mark Davidson. I never knew a boy who could get away with merely doing nothing almost on an everyday basis in class. Most of the teachers at my high school gave up long ago in trying to convince him to do work. Although, Laughlin on the other hand had not given up on the challenge, I don’t know how she did it or the exact day that it all changed. But, I do know one thing. Every day that Mark wouldn’t do his work. Laughlin would come over and sit with him and talk to him about why he wasn’t doing his work. Or I guess she would just talk to him, I really don’t know, but whatever she did, she was a miracle worker. One day I looked over at Mark and he was working and he was not just looking at his work and faking it. He was sincerely engaged in his work truly thinking and working on his class work. This is proof of Mr. Escalates words were he states, “Students will raise to the level of expectation, Senor Molina.” Mr. Escalante proved his words to be true many times. He took a classroom of students that appeared that they didn’t want to achieve anything in their life, to students that didn’t want anything other than to gain more knowledge in school. These students started to fight for their education. When the whole class was claimed to have cheated, the whole class started to get fired up about it. They all became very upset, although they were upset this still did not stop them. They continued to work, to study, they all choice to take the test again to prove that they did not cheat. They studied almost all night, the night before the test, then they all in the end passed the test. Since Mr. Escalante and Laughlin both showed their students that they truly believed in them, this helped their students believe in themselves.

            Mr. Escalante wanted to teach, he and Ms. Laughlin truly want to teach their students. They care for them and they want them to be successful. Mr. Escalante was not supposed to teach math in the beginning he actually came to teach a computers class, but because the school was so poor they couldn’t afford computers, this showed his dedication to the school even before he was dedicated to his student’s. Mr. Escalante showed dedication to his students, because he taught them in the summer, where he was only given an extremely humid classroom to teach in with no air conditioning, he taught them before school, after school. He took time way from his family at times just to teach his student’s. He spent his time asking his students about their lives, to get to know them on a personal level. Not just to look at them as another head in his classroom. This showed that he had a passion for his job that he loved what he did, being a teacher.  

            Ms. Laughlin also shows similar dedication to her student’s, she will take the time out of her day to read extra papers the student has written for another class. To correct it, to proof read it. She also will ask students about their home life. If one of her students come into the class distressed and in tears, she will take the chance to talk to them in the hallway. To mentor with them, Laughlin will let you come to her with a problem with your schedule, any problem that you may have she will take it into her hands and handle it quickly and effectively. Of course this is if you have shown her respect in her classroom, but often times she will even show this kindness to students that haven’t always treated her the best they should have.

            Since both these teachers have shown their students so much love and respect by truly caring about them, this has greatly reflected who their students have been as people. I can speak first hand that I would not be the student that I am today if Ms. Laughlin didn’t tell me on a weekly bases how she knew that I could do it. Telling me that I am intelligent, that I can accomplish the tasks she has asked of me, to trust in myself. This is much like Stand and Deliver when I can see that Mr. Escalante’s students gained a greater hope and appreciation for their lives. He set a fire within each of his students to work for the things they desired in their life. I think that is the greatest lesson a teacher and teach their students to have self-confidence and to give inspiration to their students.

Thursday, February 14, 2013

My Thesis Statement: My Paragraph

Thesis: The biggest role Mr. Escalante and Ms. Laughlin played in their students’ lives was giving them inspiration and with that self-confidence.  

The Paragraphy with more details:

            Another way Escalate and Laughlin are similar is they both have high standards for their students, they know what they can become. The great things that they can do with their life, this is why they will push their students to their full potential. They also know what that full potential is for each individual that comes into their classroom. Ms. Laughlin proved this with a student in my English class, his name was Mark Davidson. I never knew a boy who could get away with merely doing nothing almost on an everyday basis in class. Most of the teachers at my high school gave up long ago in trying to convince him to do work. Although, Laughlin on the other hand had not given up on the challenge, I don’t know how she did it or the exact day that it all changed. But, I do know one thing. Every day that Mark wouldn’t do his work. Laughlin would come over and sit with him and talk to him about why he wasn’t doing his work. Or I guess she would just talk to him, I really don’t know, but whatever she did, she was a miracle worker. One day I looked over at Mark and he was working and he was not just looking at his work and faking it. He was sincerely engaged in his work truly thinking and working on his class work. This is proof of Mr. Escalates words were he states, “Students will raise to the level of expectation, Senor Molina.” Mr. Escalante proved his words to be true many times. He took a classroom of students that appeared that they didn’t want to achieve anything in their life, to students that didn’t want anything other than to gain more knowledge in school. These students started to fight for their education. When the whole class was claimed to have cheated, the whole class started to get fired up about it. They all became very upset, although they were upset this still did not stop them. They continued to work, to study, they all choice to take the test again to prove that they did not cheat. They studied almost all night, the night before the test, then they all in the end passed the test. Since Mr. Escalante and Laughlin both showed their students that they truly believed in them, this helped their students believe in themselves.

Which Two Teachers and Why?

     I chose Ms. Laughlin a past high school English teacher of mine and Mr. Escalante to compare as both very good teachers. I chose these two teachers because they both had a great impact in their students’ lives. They both have inspired their students to be and do something more with their lives. Their students have been able to have great success and inspiration after that class. My personally situation was Ms. Laughlin put a fire with in me to me my own personal motivation. Ms. Laughlin really gave me self-confidence, she believed in me the whole time I was in her class truly believed in me and that lead me to believe in myself. 
I will write how Mr. Escalante was similar to Ms. Laughlin in the fact that he also gave his students self-motivation, you can see this because when his students had worked so hard to pass the test and when the school board thought they had cheated. His students started to fall downhill. Before the cheating situation they were feeling like they were on cloud nine. You could see the passion in his students faces, like the time that he didn’t let that boy into his class because he was late with his sick grandmother, he was crushed and he was pleading with Mr. Escalante to let him stay for the class you could see it in his eyes that he truly wanted to stay and learn.

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Mona Lisa Smiles Notes

Katharine came to Wellsey because she wanted to make a difference. Every young woman knew everything about the art. They seem super bored with the teacher and are totally over achievers. Some are pretty dang rude half way through the first class the girls got up and left. These girls are harsh and hard on their teachers.
So Ms. Watson pulls out some pictures that are not in the textbook. Ms. Watson is making these young woman think for themselves and think outside the box for say. The girls feel that if Katherine is not married and doesn’t have kids then she is not successful.
The young women go to a class that teaches you how to be a wife and how to deal with different situations. Some girls admire Ms. Watson while other girls hate the way she teaches; she wants the girls to form their own opinion.
Katherine doesn’t understand why these girls are gaining so much education just to be a stay at home mom. These girls love to gossip. Some of these young women seem very lady like but really are not. Ms. Watson is pushing the girls to go against the grain to go against what the average person in that area is doing.
Everyone assumes that the girls want to get married it is more expected then what I think all of the woman want. They think that it is their duty that they were born to fulfill. Some of these girls want so badly to change the way they are expected to do things. To change that if they don’t do something a set way, then they should be looked down upon.
Most of the people admire her teaching, but some others really despise the way she is doing things.
I like that her students still have the guts to stand up to her whether it be against her or with her. Whether if it is her way or not!
A lot of the people’s lives at not that they are not all that they are cracked up to be. Lots of husbands cheated and lots of people lie. They all pretend that everything in their life is wonderful and perfect, but the fact is it really isn’t perfect. “Not everything is as it seems.” That is to true, especially in this story.
The young women are finally getting it. They are speaking about the art, stating their true opinions on it. She has inspired these young women to be who they want. What they want to be and to support themselves in whatever they might want to do. She taught her students to “live the world threw her own eyes.”

Similarity/Differences with Watson and Escalante

Ms. Watson and Escalante and similar in the fact that they push their students beyond the text books or the average expectations that other teachers have for their students. They are similar they are both very strict with their students. They both have the school board kind of against them, in the fact that they do things a little bit different than the other teachers. The school didn’t like Mr. Escalante because the teachers didn’t like him pushing his students to do Calculus while Ms. Watson wasn’t liked for inspiring the young woman to form their own opinions about things. Both Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson have a connection with their students outside of the school setting. They both care for their students enough to listen to about their home life. They both fought for their students by going against the school board and telling them how they truly feel about the school.
They are different because Mr. Escalante taught his students with more humor and Ms. Watson teaches her students more seriously. She still jokes with them a bit, but she is not as cut loose as Mr. Escalante. Ms. Watson if very self-dependent, and not that Mr. Escalante wasn’t self-dependent, but it is a different time so he didn’t have to show his self-dependence as much as Ms. Watson did.
and Escalante and similar in the fact that they push their students beyond the text books or the average expectations that other teachers have for their students. They are similar they are both very strict with their students. They both have the school board kind of against them, in the fact that they do things a little bit different than the other teachers. The school didn’t like Mr. Escalante because the teachers didn’t like him pushing his students to do Calculus while Ms. Watson wasn’t liked for inspiring the young woman to form their own opinions about things. Both Mr. Escalante and Ms. Watson have a connection with their students outside of the school setting. They both care for their students enough to listen to about their home life. They both fought for their students by going against the school board and telling them how they truly feel about the school.
They are different because Mr. Escalante taught his students with more humor and Ms. Watson teaches her students more seriously. She still jokes with them a bit, but she is not as cut loose as Mr. Escalante. Ms. Watson if very self-dependent, and not that Mr. Escalante wasn’t self-dependent, but it is a different time so he didn’t have to show his self-dependence as much as Ms. Watson did.

Mona Lisa Smiles v.s. Stand & Deliver the Schools


Mona Lisa Smiles and Stand and Deliver both are very different schools. In Stand and Deliver the students were rude and disrespectful, but in the Wesley school the girls are well behaved and even over achievers. The girls in Mona Lisa Smiles School had read the whole text book. While the students in Stand and Deliver I’m sure had never even opened a textbook.

Also in Stand and Deliver the school is breaking down there is not enough seats for all the students in the classrooms either, while Wesley school has nice photos on the walls and they amazing huge classrooms this plenty of seats and in fact extra seats.

In Mona Lisa Smiles the young woman go to a wealth school and are wealthy. In Stand and Deliver the school in poor and lots of the students are poor and come from a very different life then the young woman in Mona Lisa Smile. The girls in Mona Lisa Smiles go to an all-girls school and it is a college. In Stand and Deliver it is both a girls and boys school and it is a high school not a college. Plus the girls there are not all prime and proper as they are in Mona Lisa Smiles. The young woman in Mona Lisa Smiles live to get married and have children while the woman in Stand and Deliver live in the moment and not so much for the future.
 
I think the biggest difference in the schools is the image. In Stand and Deliver the school image is broke and that all the students are thefts. While at the Wesley school the image is high standards, they young woman are smart and expected to get super good grades.  


Friday, February 8, 2013

How Escalante and MacFarland are Similiar


One of things I notice how they were similar is there are both a little nerdy. They both had silly things about them. Like their clothes were odd. They didn’t seem real to the students at first. MacFarland set the standard high for the kids as Escalante did “we wrote three of four essays a month. He gave us a quiz on the reading every other day.” Mr. MacFarland did a similar thing as Escalante in the fact that they gave quizzes often. They often times had class discussions; both the teachers would do different activities to evolve the class in the lesson. Mr. MacFarland kept the kids in line by teasing them, Mr. Escalante did the same. They make sure that his students are respectful to them and others in the class. “Here was this egghead, for gosh’s sake, keeping some pretty difficult people in line.”  They both were similar in the fact that they were able to give their students motivation to make them feel good about themselves. “I started reading again as I hadn’t since elementary school.” They both pushed their students to go to college. “December of the senior year, Mr. MacFarland asked me wher I was going to go to college.” As did Mr. Escalante were he would mention to his students that they would be doing this in college. And he told a father to let his daughter further her education. Both of them cared for their students outside of just school they both took the time o go above and beyond.