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How do these fit into your 2^nd paper?

I will be able to receive a better grade if my paper has less grammatical errors and also and if I make sure my words are clear and precise, I don’t want to leave my readers in a guessing game. I can use Fragment to better help me grade my own paper because I know that often times I do have fragments of  a sentence, so I’m working on that, in combining some sentences to make it complete. A way I have learned to find a fragment is when reading it, if you don’t feel that you are getting the full story. Or if the sentence leaves you confused or asking questions after you read it. I really have to make sure that I don’t fuse my sentences. Most of the time I am pretty good about using punctuation to break up my sentence, but it does happen to slip sometimes. To avoid comma slices, I just might need to add more punctuation to the sentence. But, also make sure it sounds right and makes sense to my reader. Over all I will just make sure that I have lot of people correct proof read my paper. I will also proof read my essay, just to make sure that it fits all these standards.