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I think my first paper in mainly to inform my readers of the challenges I go through with my IEP. I would like the audience to be able to connect with my writing. To be able to better understand me as well as other people they might meet in their future. To try to put yourself in others shoes during your daily life. A little bit of my paper is to entertain. I want to put a little humor in my essay to show take I can making the essay fun. I hope that the people reading my essay don’t find it boring. I want to entertain my readers and hope that they would want to continue to read my essay.  The worst thing about reading an essay is when the essay is hard to read. If it jumps around a lot or if it is boring. I will go back and read my essay again to add more details to make it more interesting and also to help the reader feel that they have all the details they need to understand my writing!